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<p><strong>SAMPLE SONNETS</strong></p>
<p><strong><em>by David B. Axelrod</em></strong></p>
<p>While the sonnet may be the best known example of formal poetry, dating back to at least the 13th Century and, of course, most known for the average literature student from study of Shakespeare, the contemporary poet who attempts the form is advised to “not try to write like Shakespeare.” That is, a contemporary sonnet does not use “fancy” or out-dated words (poetic or archaic diction); does not invert sentence structure to make a rhyme (see <a href="http://www.poetrydoctor.org/free-lessons/rhyme/">“Telling Good Rhyme from Bad”</a>); does not necessarily treat abstract ideas or heightened emotions as the subject matter. Rather, the test of a contemporary sonnet is to follow the form precisely, but make it sound like normal, conversational speech.</p>
<p>As for following the form–precisely–I would say that is the only way to learn. Roll up your sleeves and sweat with the muse. Do not go for easy rhymes, but rather just those rhymes/words that express what you mean. Do not quit until the meter is perfect iambic pentameter. There may be such a thing as “poetic license,” wherewith one feels exempt from the rules–able to break form. (Poetic license is a bit like learning to drive properly, then rolling an occasional stop sign.) But a poet who wishes to learn any form, truly ought to learn and follow the rules completely. Any less than an exact adherance to the rules would be, simply, a cop out! You would not have mastered the form.</p>
<p>That said, below I offer you some of my own attempts. <strong><em> </em></strong></p>
<p><strong> NEAR DEATH</strong></p>
<p><em> (a sonnet for Aaron Kramer)</em></p>
<p>“Do not go gentle?” Dylan missed the mark;</p>
<p>as if we all must think of death as dark.</p>
<p>I think that death’s more gentle than a birth.</p>
<p>I’ve seen a light that glows beyond the earth;</p>
<p>but not a heaven, not Elysian Fields.</p>
<p>One needn’t find salvation; rather, yield</p>
<p>to that same light that little children miss</p>
<p>in nurseries where doting parents kiss</p>
<p>their fears away indulgently.  But why?</p>
<p>Suppose it isn’t fear that makes kids cry</p>
<p>but yearning for the pre-birth light they left.</p>
<p>Then go, good journeyman, gently cleft.</p>
<p>Greet death as quietly as candles burn.</p>
<p>From light you came. To light you shall return.</p>
<p><strong>THE SNOWBIRD’S LAMENT</strong></p>
<p>The promise of an endless summer brought</p>
<p>me here. Daytona Beach, its hard, flat sand,</p>
<p>green surf, an amphitheatre where a band</p>
<p>performs for free each summer weekend. I thought</p>
<p>the warmth of Florida would compensate</p>
<p>for all the ice and snow I had to clear—</p>
<p>an end to winter doldrums and the fear</p>
<p>I’d never leave that endless, frozen state.</p>
<p>I hadn’t calculated how far north</p>
<p>I picked, or how one summer thins the blood</p>
<p>so nights in forties, days just sixty would</p>
<p>need a jacket when I venture forth.</p>
<p>It isn’t freezing. Sure, I’m glad for that.</p>
<p>I wear a bathing suit and woolen hat.</p>
<p><strong>WHAT WE EXPECTED</strong> </p>
<p>If I had said, “Please stay,” if I had said,</p>
<p>“I’ll go with you,” would you have then been pleased</p>
<p>or quickly run away?  Each time in bed,</p>
<p>I said, “I want to care,” you only teased,</p>
<p>as now you sign your letters cryptically,</p>
<p>“X K,” so I am left to guess it means</p>
<p>you send your love.  Or are you scripting me</p>
<p>in lines so hard to read the words are dreams</p>
<p>and I, fool, wanting love, fill in the lines</p>
<p>with longings long held in a breathless creams?</p>
<p>We thought our brief romance beneath Key pines</p>
<p>would never last.  We fooled ourselves it seems.</p>
<p>You say my leaving you has left a space.</p>
<p>For me, you are a love time can’t erase.</p>
<p><strong> TWO SONNETS IN FEAR OF CANCER  </strong></p>
<p><strong>1. </strong><strong>THE ODDS MAKERS</strong> </p>
<p>Awakened simultaneously at one,</p>
<p>we argue who’s to blame, whose cough resounds</p>
<p>percussive, whether health foods help prolong</p>
<p>one’s life; count careful people still struck down.</p>
<p>We quote the facts, make odds and place our bets:</p>
<p>In WW I, one out of four was killed.</p>
<p>Now one if four will die a cancer death.</p>
<p>An hour–no sleep.  The bottle rattles, pills</p>
<p>half gone; we drink a glass of tepid juice.</p>
<p>Our terrors slow their ticking, numbed by drugs</p>
<p>that stop diurnal clocks.  At noon, transfused</p>
<p>with sugared tea, we slump behind our mugs,</p>
<p>ignore the nitrates bursting in our guts,</p>
<p>the table strewn with bacon rinds and butts. </p>
<p><strong>2. </strong><strong>THROUGH SICKNESS</strong></p>
<p>Crises, you never let me comfort you,</p>
<p>would rather sit alone in dark and cry,</p>
<p>as is we hadn’t been together through</p>
<p>ten years of births or watched our close friends die.</p>
<p>To show your rage at life you call the cops,</p>
<p>phone threats of self-annihilation, 9-</p>
<p>1-1.  I wake when the receiver drops.</p>
<p>Dazed, I find you flushed with fear and blind</p>
<p>with tears.  You only asked them for protection–</p>
<p>a guard with gun to keep the cancer out.</p>
<p>“Don’t call again,” I beg.  “The cops will come</p>
<p>and get you.”  Then who would drive me crazy,</p>
<p>shout my fears away, or with her madness, fight</p>
<p>to wear me out enough to sleep at night?</p>
<p><em>(Two little notes about the second sonnet in fear of cancer. Notice that it breaks a rule at the opening by starting with “Crises.” That is the opposite accent of syllables form an iabic foot–a troche. But I wanted to start with a “cry” so I broke the rule for a reason! Also, I believe I am still the only person to use 9-1-1 correctly as part of a sonnet!)</em></p>
<p>Among those friends and poets whose sonnets I have admired, I also recommend: Aaron Kramer; Peter Meinke; Dana Gioia; X. J. Kennedy; Lewis Turco. I’m not giving you their links. Sometimes it is more fun to just type in a name and see who and what you discover!</p>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p><p><a href="http://www.poetrydoctor.org/nascar-poems/">NASCAR Poems</a></p><p>ANNOUNCING THE PUBLICATION OF  The SPEED Way: Poems about NASCAR and Growing Up with Cars and Racing  AVAILABLE IN PAPERBACK AND FOR DOWNLOAD AS AN EBOOK AT www.totalrecallpress.com CLICK HERE FOR A FULL CALENDAR OF EVENTS AND PRESS RELEASES Hello to fans of NASCAR and lovers of poetry. I&#8217;m Dave Axelrod and I&#8217;m here to entertain you with the <a href='http://www.poetrydoctor.org/nascar-poems/'>[...]</a></p></p><p><a href="http://www.poetrydoctor.org">Poetry Doctor</a> </p>]]></description>
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<p>Hello to fans of NASCAR and lovers of poetry. I&#8217;m Dave Axelrod and I&#8217;m here to entertain you with the images and emotions that go with being a NASCAR fan and a lover of cars and racing. So, okay, I never raced and, honestly, at best I’m barely an auto mechanic. But I’m not new to auto racing. My father, Sam, owned an auto parts store and was a truly talented mechanic who built and owned stockcars that raced at the old West Peabody Speedway in Massachusetts. We spent Saturday evenings at that track. I spent endless hours making wooden soapbox derby racers. And well before NASCAR was so popular, we spent every Memorial Day weekend glued to the radio and later the TV to hear the Indy. </p>
<p>In 1953, when I was just ten, my father built the first “micro-midget” racecar  in our hometown of Beverly. That&#8217;s me in the car with <a href="http://www.poetrydoctor.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/06/David-in-micromidget1.jpg"><img class="aligncenter size-medium wp-image-233" title="David in micromidget" src="http://www.poetrydoctor.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/06/David-in-micromidget1-300x247.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="247" /></a>my father and brother, Don, standing behind me.  Then, to the great annoyance of the neighbors and local police, I raced all over town. On a straightaway at the Beverly Airport, we pushed it up toward 30—about the same speed the first racecars hit when Olds brought his racer to Ormond Beach, Florida, for the first-ever auto race in 1903.     </p>
<p>Who would have thought an auto mechanic’s son would become a dedicated poet? But that’s what happened, and a later-life moment provided the inspiration for this new book of poems. In a conversation not long before my father passed away (at the age of 89) he confessed to me, “I never understood your poetry!” That set me on a project to write a book of short pieces—of poetry—that would appeal to everyone, particularly auto racing fans. <a href="http://www.poetrydoctor.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/06/DavidAllison.jpg"><img class="alignright size-medium wp-image-225" title="David&amp;Allison" src="http://www.poetrydoctor.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/06/DavidAllison-300x225.jpg" alt="" width="318" height="245" /></a></p>
<p>The book is based on my researching a lot of racing history, interviews with fans, drivers, crews, and lots of time at NASCAR events. I suppose I should also admit that I indulged myself and spent way too much money fixing up a 1968 Olds Cutlass 442 convertible with a re-worked 451 engine in it. Who cares if the numbers didn’t match. Just take your foot off the brake at a stoplight and you’d get whiplash leaving rubber. (It went away in a divorce&#8230;) So, I’ve also put in some of my own personal experiences because fast cars, racing, love and friendships are all intertwined as an important part of my life. <em>(That&#8217;s me with Bobby Allison at the Legacy of Speed Banquet.)</em></p>
<p> I hope these poems make an easy and enjoyable read. These poems mean what you think. There are no deep, hidden meanings here, and no, there will be no test at the end of the book!  Just enjoy the sights, sounds and emotions at the heart of one of America’s most popular sports.           </p>
<p><strong>WANT TO TAKE PART IN THE BOOK OR BE IN TOUCH?     </strong>I&#8217;d be happy to hear from you. I&#8217;d be happy to meet folks who have NASCAR stories. For advanced review copy of the book, contact TotalRecall Publications, Inc., 1103 Middlecreek, Friendswood, TX 77546. 281-992-3131  <a href="http://www.totalrecallpress.com/">http://www.totalrecallpress.com</a></p>
<p><a href="http://www.poetrydoctor.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/06/David-at-speedway.jpg"><img class="alignleft size-medium wp-image-235" title="David at speedway" src="http://www.poetrydoctor.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/06/David-at-speedway-300x217.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="217" /></a>Look for events to launch the book beginning in January at locations like the Living Legends of Auto Racing Museum in South Daytona Beach; the Living Legends Banquet during race week; Barnes and Noble bookstore on International Speedway Blvd., Daytona Beach; the Casements in Ormond Beach&#8211;the birthplace of autoracing. Mostly, you can find me in Daytona Beach. Contact me! I&#8217;m happy to exchange chat and facts with anyone associated with NASCAR or just a lover of cars and racing. </p>
<p style="text-align: center;">Play &#8220;Where&#8217;s Dave!&#8221; If you see me at a NASCAR event, do come up and say hello. I may yet be there in a kiosk, dressed in NASCAR driver&#8217;s colors, peddling what else? Poetry!</p>
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<p> <strong>Daytona area events for <em>The SPEED Way: Poems about NASCAR and Growing Up with Cars and Racing</em></strong></p>
<p>1. Book launch and performance, David  B. Axelrod with racing legend, Ray Fox,  and a special appearance by Barney Oldfield (aka Dan Smith, author and racing historian) at The Casements, 2 to 4 p.m., Sunday, January 29<sup>th</sup>. Open to the public, free of charge. 25 Riverside Drive, in Ormond Beach. (386-676-3216).</p>
<p>2. Saturday, February 19, 2 p.m. to 3 p.m., book signing and performance at the famous North Turn Restaurant, 4511 S. Atlantic Avenue, Ponce Inlet, FL. (386-304-0420). David Axelrod will be joined by 50s race driver and racing historian, Russ Truelove. Open to the public, free. Come early or stay after the performance to listen to live music and purchase a fine meal.</p>
<p>3. Tuesday Evening, February 21, 6 p.m., meet David B. Axelrod at the Living Legends of Auto Racing annual charity auction and celebrity book signing and autograph session. The event will be held at The Shores Resort &amp; Spa, 2637 S. Atlantic Ave, Daytona Beach Shores. Tickets are $15 in advance or $20 at the door, For more information, contact Paulette (386-299-7343) or Donna  (386-235-7449).</p>
<p>4. Meet David B. Axelrod at the souvenir table at the Living Legend of Auto Racing 20<sup>th</sup> Annual Awards Banquet, 6 p.m. on Wednesday, February 22 at The Shores Resort &amp; Spa, 2637 S. Atlantic Ave, Daytona Beach Shores. Tickets are $45. For more information, contact Joan at (386-255-7428).</p>
<p>5. Book signing with David B. Axelrod and NASCAR legend Ray Fox, at Living Legends of Auto Racing Museum, 2400 S. Ridgewood Avenue, Daytona Beach (386-763-4483). Thursday, Feb. 23, 11 a.m to 1 p.m.. Open to the public, free. Come early or stay after to enjoy the exhibits at the museum.</p>
<p>6 . David B. Axelrod will make Race Week appearances at Barnes &amp; Noble bookstore, 1900 W. International Speedway Blvd., Daytona Beach (386-238-1118). There will be a book signing table during the week and on race days, February 25 and 26.</p>
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<p>7. Thursday, April 17, 7 p.m. at Java Jungle, David B. Axelrod will perform with Walter Mims who will read his own NASCAR poems. Hosted by Tomoka Poets and Mary-Ann Westbrook (386-441-1839). Open to the public, free. Java Jungle is located at 4606 Clyde Morris Blvd., Port Orange, FL 32129  (386-760-8969).</p>
<p>7. Look for David Axelrod’s book table on Beach Street during the May 4 &amp; 5<sup>th</sup> Art of the Automobile celebration. Come enjoy daily special events and view the fascinating cars, For festival information contact Al Brewer, Evans &amp; Son Jewelers (386-255-5922).                                                            <strong><em></em></strong></p>
<p><strong><em> </em></strong><strong><em>For information contact Dr. David B. Axelrod. Email <a href="mailto:axelrodthepoet@yahoo.com">axelrodthepoet@yahoo.com</a>. </em></strong></p>
<p><strong><em>Phone 386-337-4567.  </em></strong><strong><em>Review copies and book orders: <a href="http://www.totalrecallpress.com">www.totalrecallpress.com</a> </em></strong></p>
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<p><strong> </strong><strong>ANOTHER AUTO RACING FIRST FOR ORMOND BEACH</strong><strong></strong></p>
<p>             The Casements will be the site of another first in the history of auto racing—the debut of the first book of poetry devoted entirely to NASCAR, auto racing and cars. The book launch will take place on Sunday, January 29<sup>th</sup> at 2 p.m..</p>
<p>            Dr. David B. Axelrod, author of nineteen previous book of poems, will read and talk about the poems in his newest book, <em>The SPEED Way, Poems about NASCAR and Growing Up around Racing and Cars</em> (Total Recall Press, 2012)<em>.</em> Legendary race car figure, Ray Fox, whose cars won at least 100 races, will be present to sign copies of the Godwin Kelly biography about him, <em>Ray Fox: Sly in the Stock Car Forest.</em></p>
<p>There will also be a special guest appearance of racing legend, Barney Oldfield (aka Dan Smith, journalist and racing historian).</p>
<p>Ormond Beach is famous for being the “Birthplace of Speed” with its first auto races, begun on the beach in 1903. Dr. Axelrod’s book is the first book of poems devoted entirely to auto racing, with a section about NASCAR and the Speedway and another about his childhood and lifelong infatuation with cars.</p>
<p>            The event is open to the public, free of charge. Part of the proceeds from the sale of the book will be donated to The Casements and its future programs. The Casements is located at 25 Riverside Drive, in Ormond Beach.</p>
<p>            For more information, email axelrodthepoet@yahoo.com or call Dr. Axelrod at 386-492-2409 or  call The Casements at 386-676-3216.</p>
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<p><strong>HISTORIC NORTH TURN LAUNCH FOR NASCAR POETRY</strong><strong> </strong></p>
<p>The North Turn Restaurant on A1A will be the site for a celebration of the publication of the first-ever book of poetry devoted entirely to NASCAR and auto racing. Dr. David B. Axelrod will be joined by 50s stock car racer and racing historian, Russ Truelove, for a performance and book signing.</p>
<p>This will be Dr. Axelrod’s 20<sup>th</sup> book of poetry. “Since I moved from Long Island, it seemed right to go back to my real roots — my childhood growing up with an auto mechanic dad who built stock cars to race at the old West Peabody Speedway in Massachusetts. That way I could connect all my life-long interests: cars, poetry, racing and my new home near the Daytona International Speedway,” says Axelrod.</p>
<p>The North Turn is not just famous for its restaurant, good food and entertainment. It is the actual historic site of the early Daytona stock car races. Before the Speedway opened, cars would race down A1A and back up the beach to turn at the spot now occupied by the restaurant.</p>
<p>            Ask Russ Truelove, because he was there, racing his Mercury up and down. He’s been active with racing and is even celebrated with a vehicle in front of the restaurant. You can read a poem of his about his racing framed on the restaurant’s wall.</p>
<p>The event will be held on February 19, the Saturday before the big races, from 2:00 to 3 p.m., open to the public, free. Those attending are encouraged to come early or stay after to listen to live music and purchase a fine  meal. The North Turn is located at 4511 S. Atlantic Avenue, Ponce Inlet, FL. (386-304-0420).<em></em></p>
<p><strong><em>For more information contact Dr. David B. Axelrod. Email axelrodthepoet@yahoo.com. Phone 386-337-4567. </em></strong></p>
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<p><strong>SPECIAL PERFORMANCE AT AUTO RACING MUSEUM</strong></p>
<p>            The Living Legends of Auto Racing Museum will be the site of a special Race Week appearance of Dr. David B. Axelrod, featuring his newest book,  <em>The SPEED Way: Poems about NASCAR and Growing up around Cars and Racing. </em> The event will take place on Thursday, February 23, between 11 a.m. and 1 p.m.</p>
<p>            There will also be a special guest appearance of racing legend and Museum president, Ray Fox, who has a poem devoted to him in the book. Ray, whose stock cars won over 100 races including the Daytona 500, will be signing the Godwin Kelly biography, <em>Ray Fox: Sly in the Stock Car Forest.</em></p>
<p>            Dr. Axelrod, author of nineteen previous book of poems, will read and talk about he wrote  the first book of poetry devoted entirely to NASCAR and racing. He grew up with a father who built stock cars and has included his personal experiences in the book as well.</p>
<p>The event is open to the public, free of charge. Part of the proceeds from the sale of the book will be donated to LLOAR and its future programs. The LLOAR Museum is located at 2400 S. Ridgewood Avenue, Daytona Beach. Phone 386-763-4483.</p>
<p>            For more information, email axelrodthepoet@yahoo.com or call Dr. Axelrod at 386-337-4567.</p>
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<p> Bob Blenheim continues his very successful poetry workshops on the first Tuesday of each month in room 135-C in the library at Daytona State College, 1200 W. International Speedway Blvd., Daytona Beach. Call bob at 386-506-9930 or email him at rblenheim@aol.comTomoka Poets have their open readings at Java Jungle (4606 Clyde Morris Blvd., Port Orange, FL  32129, 386-760-8969) on the third Tuesday each month. Schedule: Nov. 15, 2011 Barbara Fiefield; Dec. 20, 2011 David Turley ; Jan. 17, 2012 Daniel Blankenship; Feb. 21, 2012 Walt “Teal” Mims; Mar. 20, 2012 Rosemary Volz; Apr. 17, 2012 David Axelrod.  The Tomoka Poets also meets for a workshop at 5 p.m. on the second Wednesday of each month: Ormond Beach Library, 30 S. Beach Street, Ormond Beach. For more information, contact Mary-Ann Westbrook, 386-441-1839 or <a rel="nofollow" href="mailto:tomokapoets@bellsouth.net" target="_blank">tomokapoets@bellsouth.net</a> or <a rel="nofollow" href="mailto:mjw13west@bellsouth.net" target="_blank">mjw13west@bellsouth.net</a>).  If you would like a critique of a poem you are working on, bring between 6 to 10 copies to be passed around to participants. These are &#8220;gentle&#8221; critique sessions &#8212; no harsh, personal put downs; helpful suggestions only.</p>
<p>Fred Booth, also known as Travallion, and the Tomoka Poets will be hosting Poetry in the Park for the return to Sugar Mill Gardens, 27 November 2011, from 1:00 P.M. TO 3:00 P.M. Directions: Take Nova Rd. to Herbert St. in Port Orange(Booth&#8217;s Bowery) Go east on Herbert St. through the stop sign. Angle left onto Sugar Mill road. Approximately 300 yds. on right will be the Parking Lot.  Email for specifics for this and future venues:  Freddie Booth &lt;<a href="mailto:travallion@yahoo.com">travallion@yahoo.com</a>&gt;</p>
<p>Sweet Marley’s at 214 South Beach Street Daytona Beach, FL. 32114, will be the scene for poetry events every Monday evening at 7 p.m.. Contact: (386) 310-7817</p>
<p>Bob Calabrese conducts The Poets Corner Poetry Workshop of New Smyrna Beach on the fourth Tuesday of each month at the New Smyrna Beach Regional Library, 1001 S. Dixie Freeway. For more information, call (386) 427-3029.</p>
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<p>Send news of events to, or for  more information, contact Dr. David B. Axelrod at axelrodthepoet@yahoo.com or call 386-492-2409.</td>
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<p><span style="font-size: large;"><strong>The Poetry Audience</strong></span></p>
<p><strong><em><span style="font-size: small;">by David B. Axelrod</span></em></strong></p>
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<p><span style="font-size: small;">I&#8217;ve always been a populist poet, someone who believes that poetry is for a large audience of people, not just for English majors and academics. More recently, however, populism has taken a sad turn, bringing poetry down to a &#8220;least common denominator.&#8221;</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">When I first started writing poetry—as a thirteen-year-old boy in a macho culture—it was a secret activity. My father was an auto mechanic, a mechanical genius who could fix anything. It was as if he could talk to any machine, diagnose it, and cure it. He wasn&#8217;t very patient with his poet son, however, and to his dying day he protested &#8220;I just don&#8217;t understand poetry.&#8221; </span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">Later, in college, I had professors who made poetry a task wherein they knew its deep, hidden meaning and we, poor students, had to guess it. To read and understand a poem, we had to study the author&#8217;s life, the historical context, every conscious and unconscious motivation of the poet. Needless to say, poetry was not for everyone. You had to be a scholar, or at least a mind reader to appreciate verse. </span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">I wrote because I had strong feelings. As often, there were things that pained me—feelings of abuse, rejection, cruelty that I experienced or observed. It took me years to learn that I didn&#8217;t have to suffer to write a good poem. There is a stereotype of the poet starving in some garret, penning poems in poverty, depressed, and fixated on suffering. It is also true that, as a group, studies have shown that poets are prone to depression. </span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">I, myself, attribute those tendencies to the fact that poets are keen observers. If life conspires to deaden our senses; if we aren&#8217;t inclined or even allowed to look too closely, then those who do take a closer look are likely to see some pretty bad things. Certainly, there is a genuine balance between the good and bad, the happy and sad. We need only watch the nightly news to see the pain and suffer. A sensitive person, someone who gives a voice to all that pain, could well be sad. </span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">But this is where populism often goes astray. To reach a large group of people, poets should not &#8220;write down.&#8221; They shouldn&#8217;t have to simplify, or worse, censor themselves. Their job, like a good journalist, should be to observe and channel what they see in words that will make others pay attention. Poets, in fact, are freer than reporters who are bound by the classic rules of journalism. The old style of reporting dictated that a news story should not introduce the reporter&#8217;s opinion. Poets get to personalize, personify, and set a strong tone and theme. </span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">The task of a populist poet, therefore, is not to simplify or sanitize, but to use all his or her powers to communicate. Words are a poet&#8217;s pallet and whether it is photographic realism or abstract art, the poetry should snap the reader&#8217;s head back. Controversial subjects, graphic depictions, yes, even politically incorrect statements are fair game for poetry. There are those who say poetry should not use &#8220;those words,” or be political, or celebrate violence. To make a list of things a poet can not say is to stifle the art, to deny life. </span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">Of course, I&#8217;m not advocating that poets set out to offend people. If they did that they would, first off, not reach a large audience. Poetry can be the antidote to cruelty, the salve for pain if not the cure. It comes from such antecedents as prayer. The poet&#8217;s real challenge is to pick the right word for the right moment. In that way a poet captures and preserves what others may not have observed. </span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">The process of poetry can be transformative. It&#8217;s a kind of word magic&#8211;as surely as poets were not just the storytellers of the past but the shamans, priests, medicine men and women. I make no claims to such healing powers, though I have observed and participated in events where healings have occurred and poetry was the means.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">What I do claim now is the right, if not the power, to put all that I see and feel into words. I won&#8217;t hold back if things aren&#8217;t pretty. I won&#8217;t restrict myself only to certain words. I want the whole pallet, redolent with colors&#8211;every variation and tone. I want high definition poetry that reflects life back at all the people so they see themselves more clearly and thus understand and love themselves that much more.  </span></p>
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<p><strong><em></em><em>by David B. Axelrod</em></strong></p>
<p>Have you heard writers complain that they aren&#8217;t able to sell their writing? It probably isn&#8217;t fair for poets to complain. Let&#8217;s face it, the old adage “for love or money” is a benchmark for poets. As there is very little money in selling poems or even books of poetry, devoting yourself to poetry is almost certainly for the love of the art.</p>
<p>You can, however, find a steady outlet and even a small source of revenue in your poetry but it takes the right mind set. (See our tip on increasing your chances of publication as an example.)</p>
<p>It would help if you start with some basic definitions. If art is what you do for yourself, commercial writing is what you do with a particular audience, editor or publisher in mind. Art, if you wish, is from the heart. Commercial writing is for a particular audience.</p>
<p>That doesn&#8217;t mean you can&#8217;t sell your art. Nor does it mean commercial writing is “heartless.” Rather, it should alert those who wish to get published to the need to know their markets. An educated writer targets submissions to particular outlets. </p>
<p>For poets, “commercial art” might be most obvious in your trying to write greeting cards or offering poetry written for specific occasions. More likely, a poet who sees a call for poems on a certain theme or for a particular purpose can use that “commercial” opportunity to trigger (if not indeed inspire) a new poem or two.</p>
<p>It isn&#8217;t fair to complain if you send your work out blindly and get rejected. Imagine you send poem with a “liberal” use of language to a “conservative” magazine. It would be unlikely you would make a match. You might as well send poems that rhyme “posies” and “rosies” to an experimental poetry magazine. You&#8217;d be speaking the wrong language!</p>
<p>Clearly, the directories that list magazines and outlets for writing are of great use. They describe the general requirements as outlined by the editors. However, as often the magazine will say “We are interested in publishing only the best”—whether that is poetry, stories, opinion pieces, etc.  What “the best” is, naturally, is subjective.</p>
<p>You&#8217;d do best to find and read a sample of work before sending to a magazine or publisher. If you have “commercial” aspirations, study the contents&#8211;not just the table of contents but the advertising and layout. Ask who reads the magazine. Think what you need to do to match your writing to that special audience.</p>
<p>Because magazines and publishers survive and thrive by targeting their publications to special markets, you need to analyze the audience. Often you can get the guidelines for publication from the magazine either by sending a SASE or going on line.</p>
<p>Best of all, if you are an artist, you will be able to write for yourself and match your creations to various markets. You may be that special talent which appeals to a wide audience. If writing is a song, marketing is the dance and after all, you ought to take pleasure in it!</p>
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<p><strong><em><span style="font-size: small;">by David B. Axelrod</span></em></strong></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">Want to know how to increase your chances of getting your poems published? Even if art is something you create for yourself, it can be a great thing to share your creations with the world.</p>
<p>There are literally thousands of outlets for you to publish your poetry. Be careful, by the way, not to pay to publish in magazines or anthologies. As often the quality of the work in such paid publications is not very high. (Sometimes it is, but&#8230; more often it is just a scheme to take advantage of beginners.) </span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">You can find an audience and outlet for your work if you make a little study of print and on-line magazines. When you want to get published, you need to do some homework to match what you do to the tastes of a particular editor or audience.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">It is best, of course, if you can read a copy of the magazine before you send your poems. It is also true that your local library or store will have relatively few of the thousands of journals and alternative press magazines that are actually looking for good poems, stories and even art work and photography. </span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">If you get a copy of the Small Press Review, </span><a href="http://www.dustbooks.com/"><span style="font-size: small;">www.dustbooks.com</span></a><span style="font-size: small;"> you can find a list of magazines that offer free samples. You&#8217;ll also find announcements of new magazines and markets calling for specific themes. The International Directory of Little Magazines and Small Presses (published by Dustbooks) lists thousands of outlets!</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">Of course, we now live is a digital world, so chances of publication on-line are simply wonderful. With the cost of printing rising and the facility of publishing a magazine on-line (now known as publishing an &#8220;Ezine&#8221;) you have a dazzling array of choices. If you Google &#8220;poetry Ezine&#8221;  you will get well over two million links. Not satisfied? Then Google &#8220;poetry magazine&#8221; and the list is thirty-nine million, most of which as I scrolled through the first fifty, will accept your submissions on-line.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">Here&#8217;s a trade secret we have tried and succeeded with: when you read the poems in a magazine, pay particular attention to the title and the opening line of each poem. If the editor likes the opening, that will definitely help you get published. But if you really want to get published, be sure that the last line of your poem ends the way poems end in the magazine you are reading. We have had four times greater success placing poems using these &#8220;tricks&#8221; to match our poems to the magazines to which we&#8217;ve sent our poems!</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">Take pride in your work. Prepare it carefully—free of typos, well-edited and tested (at workshops) to be sure you have chosen the right words. Then send it out to others. Poems can take on a life of their own. Then, imagine your satisfaction knowing someone half way around the world could be reading your thoughts and poems!</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-size: small;"><em><strong>by David B. Axelrod</strong></em></span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;"><em>Note: I know this memoir/story has no direct bearing on my work as a poetry doctor, but I am proud to offer this remembrance of the September 11th terrorist attacks.</em></span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    The neighbor says “Did you hear the news? Two planes crashed into the World Trade Center</span><span style="font-size: small;">.”</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    It’s 9:10 at the bus stop. His wife told me he hits her. He seems like such a nice guy. The Chinese have a saying: “Every family has a hard book to read.”</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    “Two planes?” I say, “It must be some kind of beacon problem. They went off course.” Terrorism doesn’t even come to mind. It’s the corner of Here and There in suburban Long Island. All we worry about around here is too many Canada geese in the little pond nearby. They are turning the water a sickly green.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    Who thinks of terrorism on such a beautiful sunny day? Terrorism: 1. a belief in terror? 2. Terrifying things done on purpose? 3. My brother jumps out from behind a tree screaming as I walk to school. I run home crying.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    We put our kids on the bus. His nine year old son hugs and kisses him. “I love you, Daddy.”</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    “I love you too.” he says.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    I think of how his wife confided that some nights she lies awake, terrified. “He told me <span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">�</span>If you ever leave me I’ll kill you.’“</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    My own daughter clunks up the steep bus stairs with her oversized red book bag. She hardly looks back. She has her mother’s eyes, sometimes her mother’s caustic tongue. For four years since the divorce, I’ve been Mr. Mom and she still argues with me that I don’t know how to do her hair.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    Inside the house I forget the news, start a breakfast of too much red meat, greasy fried potatoes. As I reach for the Times I remember the neighbor’s bulletin and get up to turn on the TV. Smoke flame billow from the twin towers. An urgency that is usually inappropriate edges the voice of the news commentator. A camera zooms in on what we’re told is someone falling. It isn’t clear if it’s a man or woman but the arms flailing indicates it isn’t a piece of debris.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    The screen splits to show a replay of a large plane approaching the twin tower, angling to impact with a giant ball of flame. I’m surprised at how stunned I am. I’ve seen a lot, more than you’d care to know. “Hi, how are you, “ is just a ritual. Don’t ask is good advice. Don’t tell is better.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    Just as I’m adjusting to what announcers are calling “a possible terrorist act, “ someone with a handheld camera screams “get back” and a tower begins to collapse. It’s just like a slow motion filming of a demolition scene, layer after layer flattening downward faster and faster into a cloud of dust and smoke. It’s so much like the special effects I’ve seen in movies that I’m bothered. It can’t be real.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    The people running, screaming must be movie extras. Only there’s the overweight cop who weaves around other panicking people, shoves a woman and runs out ahead of the billowing cloud of debris and smoke. Much later there will be the video footage of cops beating a fellow who “tried to pedal his bike past a police officer who told him to stop.” The announcer explains, “Impatient, tired, the police seem to be taking their frustrations out on him.” I doubt there will be an investigation.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    The entire World Trade Tower</span><span style="font-size: small;"> is gone. I feel a surprising tightness in my jaw, hear a ringing in my ears. I’m amazed at how amazed I am. And then the TV voice asks, “Do you think the other tower is leaning?”</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    Almost as quickly it’s coming down, only this time the huge TV tower on top is visibly falling in the center. I remember being out on the observation deck atop the South Tower</span><span style="font-size: small;">, looking over at the other building and how huge that broadcast antenna was. There as was Frenchman who strung a cable from one tower to the other and walked across the chasm! What gall! I always pictured him walking with his balance pole and the cable tied to the top of that antenna.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    Now it’s falling down, falling down. With it goes the indifference I had recently worked so hard to cultivate. “Who gives a damn. It’s no big deal; all just part of life.” It isn’t nihilism, just a desire to detoxify, to shake loose from too much pain and too much striving. But I feel first a great uneasiness rising out of that dust cloud and later an anger.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    The news coverage goes on and on with details. I place a call to my employer and say I won’t be coming in. I say I have an ear ache&#8211;not completely untrue as I realize I’ve tightened my jaw so much I’m in pain. Later they will cancel the day’s work and close up anyway. I’m saved a sick day and a small lie.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    A parade of officials come forward to promise “everything we can do to help.”</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    It occurs to me that people inside&#8211;one estimate in the thousands&#8211;won’t take much consolation from all this, their bones likely ground to dust with the buildings’ collapse. The President comes on to say “We’ll get the folks who did this.” Not exactly inspirational.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    The phone rings several times. Older daughters reassure me they and their spouse, fianc<span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">é</span>, friends are okay. Close calls. One might have been down by the WTC but decided to head up-town instead. She tells me later that she walked five miles, from mid-town, over the 59th Street Bridge and all the way to Astoria to get home. “It was a beautiful day. I felt guilty because I was enjoying the walk.”</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    The woman who’s husband beats her calls to ask me if I can get her kid if the elementary school closes. “Don’t worry, “ I reassure her. “I’m always here for you.” If only it were that easy, I think. I gave her numbers to call&#8211;women’s groups, domestic services, and an attorney. That was a year ago and they’ve stayed together. What can a person do?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    Before I notice, it’s time for my daughter to get off the bus. There she is all flush with the news. “The teacher didn’t give us any homework tonight. She was too busy with what happened and forgot.”</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    I bring her in and settle her in front of the TV but every channel is playing and replaying the plane that crashes into the towers and then the towers falling down.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    “Wow, “ she exclaims. “I went there and now they aren’t there.” And then it dawns on her, no cartoons. We experiment and even the shopping channels are either off the air or showing news. A couple satellite channels are still replaying the usual cartoons. Disney has an old Donald Duck cartoon in which, ironically, Donald is parading around in his World War II uniform trying to be heroic.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    When I saw that cartoon for the first time we were still being asked to buy liberty bonds. I think how many times during the day people compared the events to Pearl Harbor. For me, it was a bit like the assassination of JFK, as for the magnitude of people’s reactions. We live through so much. It’s a crazy existence and it’s amazing who does survive.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    Not long after my daughter’s return we decide to head out&#8211;upset by the continuing coverage, longing for something to do. We drive toward a department store where I’m scheduled to pick up a new vacuum cleaner. Wow, best suction available. I wonder what’s in the thick dust coating everything where the buildings collapsed. How will they ever be able to clean that?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    I promise my daughter she can get the Tweety quilt she has been asking for. But when we get there, to our mutual amazement, the department store is closed. Why? Why would they close on a perfectly good business day? Was this terrorist thing really such a big deal that a store sixty miles away needed to let its help go home?</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">    I guess so, I know so, but all the way home my daughter complains until, turning into our driveway I am forced to say, “For pity sake, thousands of people have died.” We spend a quiet evening pretending we are safe at home.</span></p>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p><p><a href="http://www.poetrydoctor.org/the-conscience-of-a-poet/">The Conscience of a Poet</a></p><p>THE CONSCIENCE OF A POET by David B. Axelrod                                               Note: Click on this link to see a clock that ticks away to estimate the cost of the war in Iraq: http://costofwar.com/en/.  Consider that the cost of the Tomahawk missiles we fired at the start of the Iraq war alone (at aproximately $1,400,000 for the missles alone, not <a href='http://www.poetrydoctor.org/the-conscience-of-a-poet/'>[...]</a></p></p><p><a href="http://www.poetrydoctor.org">Poetry Doctor</a> </p>]]></description>
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<p style="text-align: center;"><em><strong>by David B. Axelrod</strong></em></p>
<p style="text-align: left;"><span style="font-size: small;">                                              <em>Note: Click on this link to see a clock that ticks away to estimate the cost of the war in </em></span><span style="font-size: small;"><em>Iraq</em><em>:</em></span><em><em><a href="http://costofwar.com/en/"><span style="font-size: small;"> http://costofwar.com/en/</span></a><span style="font-size: small;">.  </span></em></em></p>
<p style="text-align: left;"><em><em><span style="font-size: small;">Consider that the cost of the Tomahawk missiles we fired at the start of the </span></em></em><span style="font-size: small;"><em>Iraq</em><em> war alone (at aproximately $1,400,000 for the missles alone, not counting the cost of deploying them to the field of war) is about the same as the entire annual budget for the National Endowment for the Arts. In fact, the NEA&#8217;s entire budget for 2010 (167,500,000) represents only about one and a half cents per tax dollar. What should a poet make of all this?</em></span></p>
<p style="text-align: left;"><span style="font-size: small;">Folks have asked me if I would participate in readings against the war in Iraq. I am not a particularly political person. I have always maintained that poetry is a &#8220;politics&#8221; of its own. I consider it my duty to observe and give voice to what truths I may see. Poetry comes from an ancient an honorable tradition: Seekers of Truth. We write our poems and in so doing, we try to encircle the truth.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">Working folks                      Crazy People </span><span style="font-size: small;">                    </span></p>
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<p><span style="font-size: small;">People of Letters </span><span style="font-size: small;">                Holy People</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;"> Poets can, after all, be people from all walks of life. There are many good, hard-working, relatively un-trained people who write fine poetry. When I lived and performed my poems in Sicily, for instance, I was frequently approached by farmers and fisherman who asked to recite their poems. When they did so,  they spoke with passion, reciting long lyric poems in praise of nature and their land&#8211;and all from memory! They were passionate poets! Other people may consciously reject higher education, or they may be self-trained. But theirs is every bit as valid a search. It may be a tragedy in life turns them inward and they find,  perhaps just once in their life,  that they have a poem to express.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">Then,  of course, there are those who have spent time in the universities and often those poets who earn their living as people of letters. B.A., M.A., M.F.A., Ph.D.! I myself have more letters after my last name than in it. We who are accredited may have a formal claim on &#8220;professing&#8221; to know the truth but there is no guarantee higher education will make a person a good poet, let alone a clearer seer of the truth.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">Those who claim inspiration&#8211;pastors,  priests,  shaman,  gurus,  prophets&#8211;are often poets. Certainly, poetry has roots in prayer,  incantation,  mantras,  spells. Words can have great power, can  persuade and lead, can comfort and heal.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">We ought also to mention those who may be judged as &#8220;crazy.&#8221; I use the word to suggest that there is a wide spectrum of people who may also be writing some very interesting poetry. One person&#8217;s prophet is another&#8217;s madman. Is it the voice of god one hears or a psychotic episode? I am not making fun of religion. Rather,  I am saying that poets often see the world in ways others don&#8217;t,  or don&#8217;t understand. True genius is often misunderstood. Then again,  it was the court jester alone who might be allowed to speak the honest truth to the King at court. &#8220;Sire,  you aren&#8217;t just naked,  you are ugly!&#8221;</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">Which brings me to why I, for one, have been spending time in my poetry workshops talking about Iraq, Afghanistan&#8211;all the wars we keep fighting&#8211; and hoping to move us all a bit closer to the truth. I&#8217;ve spent a lifetime trying to see more clearly through poetry. If poets are truth seekers and sooth sayers,  they should be given extra attention and time. Poets have a responsibility to their tradition to speak out at any time they see something that should be noticed! Times of war poets in particular should feel compelled to say the truth as they see it.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">Of course,  I sometimes remember the beautifully printed and bound book of poems I found in a used bookstore. Leather binding,  gilded edges,  fine etchings. I should say that, though it was from the 1860&#8242;s, the poetry still read easily and the narrative was clear. The only problem,  the poet,  Henry Timrod,  was writing to further the cause of the Confederacy he loved so dearly. </span><a href="http://www.poetry-archive.com/t/timrod_henry.html"><span style="font-size: small;">www.poetry-archive.com/t/timrod_henry.html</span></a><span style="font-size: small;">  That&#8217;s why we don&#8217;t find any of his poems in many anthologies since the South lost the Civil War.</span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: small;">For poets,  the real cause is in rendering reality in the most engaging way. Poets aren&#8217;t just partisans,  we aren&#8217;t just writing poems,  we are from a tradition of poeple who teach the world to care.</span></p>
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